May 14th, 2011, 9:11 pm

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Petty, May 14th, 2011, 9:24 pm     Reply


Phew! Finally got the update done!

Here's the battle log for mewtwo:

-Mewtwo- Safeguard/Lulu- Sleeppowder (miss)
-Swap for Leopold/M-Psychic
-Swap for Pongo/Mewtwo- Swift
-Mewtwo-Recover/Pongo-Megahorn KO'D.

Uhhh, I didn't actually use the masterball in game, PONGO Ko'd him as you can see, but I wanted a bit more drama. ;)

Just the epilogue left! Look for it soon!

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AnXjak, May 14th, 2011, 9:30 pm     Reply


That was hardcore.


Mr Greed (Guest), May 14th, 2011, 9:32 pm     Reply

Dude, that was dark. Gary lost his arm and mewtwo died. I was not expecting that...

godmoderncommander, May 14th, 2011, 9:35 pm     Reply

While I can't wait for the next comic, it will be the end of this comic. ...Oh God I can't take it!!

docScott (Guest), May 14th, 2011, 9:37 pm     Reply

Holy crap! Just, holy crap! You killed Mewtwo! A ten year old girl crushed Mewtwo! Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?

SpiralPen, May 14th, 2011, 9:37 pm     Reply

This was about twenty times more incredible than I could have possibly expected.

; 7 ;

You definitely did Mewtwo justice.

SpiralPen, May 14th, 2011, 9:38 pm     Reply

XD don't worry!
She's doing a HGSS sequel!
Just hang in there!

Floydyboy, May 14th, 2011, 9:39 pm     Reply

Holy hell. That was the most blood that I've ever seen in a Pokemon comic.

Blue Rose, May 14th, 2011, 9:40 pm     Reply

Absolutely incredible, Petty!

I wasn't expecting such a dark turn in Cerulean Cave, but I seriously got pulled in instantly after I saw what happened to Gary.

I'm very glad everyone made it out alright. To be honest, I was a bit worried Barb or Spuds might not have made it because of the type disadvantage. But you played very strategically.

Great work again, Petty. I look forward to the epilogue.

PyroTeam, May 14th, 2011, 9:40 pm     Reply

That was...

Thunder the HalfBloodHedgehog, May 14th, 2011, 9:41 pm     Reply

O_o O.M.G. Gary... Blood... Death... OH GOSH I CAN'T TAKE IT. *faints*

Bre Ishurna the Wolf, May 14th, 2011, 9:49 pm     Reply

Holy Fu-

So dark.

Gawd this is so epic

Irene the SeedrianRabbit, May 14th, 2011, 9:52 pm     Reply

And on that day, my view towards the pokemon series was changed drastically - at the sight of Gary losing his arm, and of Mewtwo finally be put to rest. Aye jepatchi~
My mind is blown~ :O

Daximed (Guest), May 14th, 2011, 10:14 pm     Reply

Petty... That was so amazing 0*0
I wasn't expecting that at all!
Gary lost a limb and Mewtwo lost his life!! I don't want this to end!

HGSS can't come faster!!

Xcountry21 (Guest), May 14th, 2011, 11:22 pm     Reply

@d2k - I noticed that too.

@Petty - Love the comic. I can't wait to see the end of this an HGSS.

Petty, May 15th, 2011, 12:38 am     Reply

@d2k: Woah! I'm surprised I never caught that-- this is what I get for staying up for 36 hours straight! Thanks, and fix'd. :> <3

MarillTachiquin (Guest), May 15th, 2011, 12:57 am     Reply

Amazing comic!! No wonder why it took you so long!!!!! All the details, effects, everything!!!! You're the best!!!!! =D

Samurai pizza hedgehog, May 15th, 2011, 1:17 am     Reply

holy bleep on a bleep sandwich that was epic!

Hoolo (Guest), May 15th, 2011, 2:04 am     Reply

And there we have the reason why Cerulean Cave was in a collapsed state in Gen II.
And lots of going berserk.
Much fun was had.

CityBreak, May 15th, 2011, 7:19 am     Reply

this is my favourite comic so far. It was one of those comics that kept you on the edge of your seat waiting to see what happened next. amazing stuff as always and can't wait to see how you finish this comic and start the next

LazyChocobo, May 15th, 2011, 7:52 am     Reply

Oh gosh I hope you'll go to Johto next!

Xweetke, May 15th, 2011, 8:25 am     Reply

woooow... just woooow...

You just made pokemon hardcore and epic and... woooow...

Jessicandy, May 15th, 2011, 8:58 am     Reply

This is by far the most epic page you have ever made. I absolutely love the dark turn you've taken with this!

Rukasu (Guest), May 15th, 2011, 9:02 am     Reply

Outstanding, amazing, astonishing... Words can't describe what i feel right now, you are AWESOME, i've been reading your comics months ago, and let me tell you, you are incredible at this. See how you turn Pokemon in a dark, mature, and at the same time funny story. You have talent at this, know it. I look up to you, you always inspire me.

Just have a question... In the nuzlocke challenge, is against the rules to capture, for example, Mewtwo?

Pat-Man12, May 15th, 2011, 9:04 am     Reply

Sooo... how will Gary be a gym leader now?

Majin Tobias, May 15th, 2011, 9:06 am     Reply

He has another hand, right?

Pat-Man12, May 15th, 2011, 9:08 am     Reply

But he has two in the Gen II and IV games. Plot hole? Or will he just get a prosthetic arm?

SkweeMan, May 15th, 2011, 9:47 am     Reply

*goes back to page 1*
Oh yeah, This comic started with a creeper Oak asking if your a boy or girl, INSITING you were a boy. and now we have Main character smashing Legendary in a masterball to death....I HAVE to find the turning point to this.

SolarAngel, May 15th, 2011, 12:42 pm     Reply

I cannot describe this.

For niw, I shall think up new words to describe this. Like 'Pettytastic'.

GrimFawks, May 15th, 2011, 2:35 pm     Reply

Hey, if Loche is the player character, wouldn't that mean she will eventually go off to Mt. Silver? Just as PKMN Trainer Red did?

Celestial_Wolf, May 15th, 2011, 3:00 pm     Reply

Well, the only thing left to do is the bonus round, Elite 4 Round 2. But even I doubt your team will be able to get through that?

Bre Ishurna the Wolf, May 15th, 2011, 3:48 pm     Reply


If Mewtwo died in this, and he reappears in HGSS, I wonder if he will be a ghost in the sequel.

shadic565, May 15th, 2011, 4:34 pm     Reply

epic while listening to this

Trollguy_&_Memeboi (Guest), May 15th, 2011, 6:14 pm     Reply

After HG/SS, are you going to do a R/S/E run?

KupKayke, May 15th, 2011, 7:30 pm     Reply

HOREY SHET. This is the most epic page in a Nuzlocke that I've ever read!

(Also for some reason I read Mewtwos lines not is his voice from Pokemon, the First Movie, but in Yami Yugi's voice and it matched the intensity of this page that much more epic.)

Guest, May 15th, 2011, 8:09 pm     Reply

You are the queen of awesomeness!!!!


Shadow Raikou, May 15th, 2011, 9:52 pm     Reply

Great. I wonder blaine will kill locke, but thats too Blain-y, so we wont. Oh wait! I just found out! The Page is in color!

Shrewstur, May 16th, 2011, 3:26 am     Reply

Can't wait for the epilogue. ^^ Really like how you're pulling this ending together.

Pokeholic (Guest), May 16th, 2011, 4:19 am     Reply

*mind explodes*

Dan (Guest), May 16th, 2011, 6:22 am     Reply

Fantastic. This is easily my favourite web comic based on a game. I really hope you do another run after this as well. Obviously, I'm not expecting you to do anything straight away but I'm be keeping an eye on the site for news :)

Guest, May 16th, 2011, 7:15 am     Reply

Queen of awesomeness!!!!


HalfAssedChaos, May 16th, 2011, 8:38 am     Reply

Wow, very interesting way to depict the Mewtwo fight.

Had me on pins and needles, thanks for putting out such a great Nuzlocke comic Petty, surely it is one of the best.

Jim (Guest), May 16th, 2011, 9:59 am     Reply

By the way, I was on DA surfing through Nuzlocke comics and I keep seeing this guy named MewtwoStruckBack. He seems to take this stuff way too seriously like pokemon are actually real and crap. I just hope to arceus he doesn't go outside of DA and post, say, on here. Because his ideals are just ludicrous and should be ignored on the spot. Nuzlockes are just a new challenge meant to be fun for the games, and comics help emphasize the runs. And if he doesn't like it, he should just shut up and not read it.

Fantastic work on the Mewtwo battle by the way.

MEEP GOD, May 16th, 2011, 10:27 am     Reply

So now we just wait for the final part of the Sevii, which will be the final... then there is heart gold... A bit of advice... if your gonna use the nuzlock rules in the viridian trainer house for whatever reason... Don't face Cal... God I really hate his meganium...

ShadowEevee128, May 17th, 2011, 1:43 pm     Reply

Damn it! I can stop shaking!
Question: I've been wanting to ask you this for a while. Do really play the pokemon games then write what you did in comic form?

The Master (Guest), May 17th, 2011, 2:09 pm     Reply

Hate to nitpick, but... where did gary get that bandage?

jeffreyex, May 17th, 2011, 2:33 pm     Reply

Locke Level up!

ehmehlehh, May 17th, 2011, 3:31 pm     Reply

Gary's FUCKING ARM OH MY GOD this was the bestttttttttttt thing I have EVER READ!

roflcopta111 (Guest), May 17th, 2011, 8:10 pm     Reply


Petty, May 17th, 2011, 10:04 pm     Reply

@ShadowEevee128: Yep! I play through them (usually months in advance) and then draw the comics based one what happened. :)

@The Master: LOCKE hands BARB the bandages from her backpack-- it's in that panel where she's kneeling and talking to BARB while GARY tries to warn her.

ie1lik3pe (Guest), May 18th, 2011, 1:47 am     Reply

I've been reading his for a while, and damn. This is easily as intense as the Pokemon Special manga, and nearly as amazing. Coming from me, that means something, PokeSpe is one of the greatest manga I've ever read.

darkdramon, May 18th, 2011, 5:15 am     Reply


The Master (Guest), May 18th, 2011, 1:30 pm     Reply


Ah, I see now.

i have to say, I agree with you there. This quite easily comes very close to the awesome that is Pokespe. And I consider Pokespe to be better than the games. And I consider the games better than the anime.

So basically: Pokespe>This>Games>anime

the anime doesn't deserve a capital letter.

Everything has it's time, and everything must end.

Rukasu (Guest), May 18th, 2011, 5:37 pm     Reply

Just a simple question!
In the nuzlocke challenge, is against the rules to capture, for example, Mewtwo?

oh and EXCELENTE comic, btw :D

RedJac, May 18th, 2011, 10:03 pm     Reply

I have spent the entire day reading this comic.

Akimare34, May 19th, 2011, 12:31 am     Reply

NOOOOOOOOO! It CAN'T end! it's so... BAHHHHH!!!

I just realised I don't think I've ever comented here before, BUT STILL NOOO! We will always keep ou and your pokemon in our hearts Locke! Now I need to do something based on you guys in one of my nuzlockes... which, btw, were inspired by this one. because it's awesom. period.

Rukasu (Guest), May 19th, 2011, 6:11 pm     Reply

So, no one will answer my simple question? :(

Guest (Guest), May 19th, 2011, 10:34 pm     Reply

@Rukasu - that rule is up to the individual player. Petty elected not to use Repels, so there is no way she would make it to any of the legendary Pokemon. There are other players who will use Repels to make sure their first encounter in the area is with the legendary they want to capture, which makes sure they don't break the "can only catch the first encounter in the area" main rule. You'll see both types of runs out there.

Blue Rose, May 20th, 2011, 4:56 pm     Reply

@smeagol92055: Actually, The no second chances thing is a required rule, so that applies to ALL nuzlocke runs.

Nuwt (Guest), May 20th, 2011, 6:18 pm     Reply

I cant stop reading this

TheProjectCore, May 22nd, 2011, 7:26 pm     Reply

This nuzloke is amazing you should do an Johto region one.

Petty Fan (Guest), May 25th, 2011, 3:56 pm     Reply

Um.. if you've been reading any of the comments on here or on deveintART for this comic, then you'd know she's gonna do an HG run.

... (Guest), June 1st, 2011, 6:23 pm     Reply

.......If it were me I would have kept mew two, turned him into my kill slave, obliterated the elite four forty two times for exp, and then took over the word.....I think I need to find my old pokemon blue.

KaibaKitty, June 3rd, 2011, 11:59 am     Reply

Holy shiiiiiiiiiiiii--
I just marathoned this whole comic, from start to finish. It's so good zomfgwerijomwled. And this whole page -- just WHOA. I don't even know where to begin. It was so intense. I was preparing for another heart-wrenching death -- so glad there wasn't one. But Mewtwo and Gary, dude. Oh my god. Freaking. Intense. Can't wait for the epilogue, and your HG run! :D

Guest, June 3rd, 2011, 7:39 pm     Reply

Not that I don't like the seriousness, but when you do the HG run, can you go back to the comedy of the first parts of the FR run? those were awesome, and i sort of miss them :(

RavenHeart98, June 6th, 2011, 2:10 am     Reply

Holy shit..
I never expected this to get so.... badass, really.
That is one hard-core heroine, I must say.

Trollguy_&_Memeboi (Guest), June 17th, 2011, 9:48 am     Reply

No matter how many times I read this part...
...I end up thinking, "Locke is BADASS!"

Pokemontrainergigi, June 19th, 2011, 12:26 am     Reply

This completely makes no sense to me but I was playing Left 4 Dead 2 and a zombie's arm got cut off and I thought of this Nuzlocke (this page especially XD) o3o That is weird but this comic was awesome 8D

I even made my friend read the whole thing from start to finish -3-

ShadowEmerl, August 25th, 2011, 2:24 pm     Reply

No one? Ok.

Mewtwo: Kill me!
Locke: Later...

Elusive (Guest), October 7th, 2011, 1:47 am     Reply

Pongo throwing that Swift back at Mewtwo was beast.

AlexaClyne (Guest), November 5th, 2011, 1:58 am     Reply

I didn't expect Gary there. TO LOSE AN ARM EVEN. ;____; Despite the fact he's been a total pain, I feel so bad for him.

And gosh, Mewtwo is so scary. ;___;


Stryker (Guest), January 6th, 2012, 1:42 am     Reply

V 'nuff said V
garys pokemans all died... he lost an arm... fuckn mewtwo died... epic fuckn battle... no casualties on your part...Just...FUCK YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

pink pikachu, February 15th, 2012, 7:10 am     Reply

SCARY MEWTWO gary lost a arm what gross thing(arm loss)and epiness could happen next

Guest, February 21st, 2012, 6:49 pm     Reply

am I the only one that realized she lost her awesome hat. DAMN U MEWTWO

TheNuzlockeChallenger (Guest), April 17th, 2012, 2:25 am     Reply

Petty, answer me and don't ignore me 'cuz I want the HG Nuzlocke to be more greater. I want Lugia's scene a bit more of my taste. !st of all, the kimono Girl's will dance and then run away and warn you of the danger. @nd, Lugia will speak to you using Telepathy. #rde, Lugia then charges at you but is blocked by the starter. Lastly, Lugia will than you and fall into the water. Got it? Good.

Ramonerdna, May 1st, 2012, 3:27 am     Reply

I dont think i could ever let a Mewtwo go free when I had a master ball...even in a Nuzlocke

Arki (Guest), July 16th, 2012, 9:06 pm     Reply

Well, uh. Where to start? The story escalates from fun and light hearted, to the Rival turning into a man hell-bent and causing Locke as much pain as is humanly possible. Gary loses his arm, and I assume all of his pokemon, due to the 25th panel. Mewtwo is brutally crushed against a cave wall, and Cerulean Cave completely implodes. I approve of this story. Go Petty!

Miles Hikari (Guest), August 10th, 2012, 11:31 pm     Reply

In shock and awe
Just... wow... I don't know what to say.

Jolttra, August 12th, 2012, 4:35 pm     Reply

Notice how the only members of Gary's party we actually see dead are Charizard and Alakazam. That explains why Gary doesn't have them in Gold and Silver. I get why the designers left out the starters, but why did they replace Alakazam?

Clovis (Guest), September 24th, 2012, 3:28 pm     Reply

Oh gawd I can't imagine a more horrible ending....
all the pokemon of gary are dead but himself just lost one arm
and poor mewtwo just wanted to be free, why being strong would make him being the one to kill

AAAARRGGGH this could not be more accurate on how pokemon are treathen

Hipno702 (Guest), April 20th, 2013, 7:08 pm     Reply

@Floydyboy: Lol you should read pokemon adventures

giggles (Guest), September 20th, 2013, 6:42 am     Reply

@d2k: it Was the right hand.

StereophonicA (Guest), September 21st, 2013, 3:56 am     Reply

The last panel...

Petty, was that a Lord of the Rings reference? I can totally see Locke and Gary as Sam and Frodo.

Scorpio750, December 1st, 2013, 4:59 am     Reply

I don't like the turn in this panel... I feel like Locke was in the wrong here. Mewtwo should've been kept free. It was wrong to kill him when he did no wrong.

fdferfsdf (Guest), December 29th, 2013, 5:31 pm     Reply

I'm not saying it should have like psychic or something but I wish mewtwo didn't only have SWIFT extremely underpowered :I

Zeldafan2000, January 5th, 2014, 2:11 am     Reply

More Epic
@shadic565: It's even more epic while listening to this! This is so awesome!!

Riley (Guest), March 4th, 2015, 8:00 pm     Reply

Welp, I guess that explains why blue/green/gary doesn't have his starter or kazam in HGSS

TippyToe Zombie (Guest), May 24th, 2015, 2:58 am     Reply

Gary's True Colors.
I liked that Gary told her to run because he knew that there was real danger. Shows that he's not really a bad person.

Oldrivalshipper (Guest), June 10th, 2015, 6:08 am     Reply

I know this comment is totally inappropriate for such a dark comic but LOVE the fluff between Locke and Gary the Douchebag! MOAR FLUFF THO THIS COMIC IS OVER!!!

Derpy (Guest), June 10th, 2015, 8:19 pm     Reply

I wish you'd kept Mewtwo your slave and called him Mr Whiskers, or Floating Pink Foetus (oh wait that's Mew) or something else even more embarrassing.

Derp (Guest), July 4th, 2015, 11:59 pm     Reply

This. Is. Totally. Pokespe standards. And Pok├ęspe standards are through the f@cking roof. (I applaud you Petty)

BRVR (Guest), June 5th, 2016, 10:25 pm     Reply

WOAH. That was dark. I think it got serious somewhere around where the music died.

Mystic Fire (Guest), September 5th, 2017, 4:29 pm     Reply

That was fucking DARK
Like years of intense therapy kind of dark

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